the face is better, but the skin is kinda flat, try to use srtriker's templates , for the shirt, keep the logos as they are and use "full body attires texture" from orson's bumper box upper and lower chest and back, i think you'll need a small portion in the neck too... be careful to cut out the parts of the skin and then just recolor
. from the same bumper box use the boiler suit, the crotch, and upper/lower legs
. also, google and search for a belt texture, OR use the default one that doesn't look bad.
Also, he doesn't have tattoos in both arms, and next time don't make it that transparent. give your caw undertaker's tattoo's and then re-dump your textures, if it's to complex to figure out which texture belongs to which part of the arms or which arm, open them and mark a spot in the original textures with diferent colors so you can easily recognize them.
Alignment: for the body use a image with the resolution of 256x224, so you can edit exactly as it will appear in the game.
Arms: 128x392
Hints.... the upper body front texture also has both sides of the neck, these are in the upper corners, left and right, so be careful.
Also in the crotch there's a part in the lower middle that reaches part of the leg, also be careful, these are hard to align.
hope what i've told you helps with your progress