[Closed] Fortune - Preview!

[The-K]

Well here is a little preview of Fortune...
so this is it for now

Any Suggestions/Advices ?

*CREDITS*
-Bases lolol(yandao)
-CM's Things
-Raw 2 Heads
-SvR Textures
-Orson Bumper Box

 

[AKI Man]

In my opinion?

This is looking real promising K! Real promising.

Now the suggestions:

I think the faces for Storms face and Daniels needs work.. Ie. I can see storm in the eyes, but the nose, mouth area needs resizing.. His nose is too long and the hair is too blonde imo.. Needs a similar shade to the mouth! I would suggest trying a different face ref of which I will help you with.. Daniels face is better than the first preview I saw before, but I think his nose is too wide along with the mouth.. The attires are very nice K.. Keep working on this. I like it alot.

 

[The-K]

<blockquote class='quote\\_blockquote'><dl><dt>AKI Man</dt><dd>Jul 21 2011, 08:02:00 PM</dd></dl><div>In my opinion?

This is looking real promising K! Real promising.

Now the suggestions:

I think the faces for Storms face and Daniels needs work.. Ie. I can see storm in the eyes, but the nose, mouth area needs resizing.. His nose is too long and the hair is too blonde imo.. Needs a similar shade to the mouth! I would suggest trying a different face ref of which I will help you with.. Daniels face is better than the first preview I saw before, but I think his nose is too wide along with the mouth.. The attires are very nice K.. Keep working on this. I like it alot.[/quote]Thanks man for your suggestions

now i have a little problem in james storm face... i'm not find any face pic of him without sunglasses and hat, he always have sunglasses and hat,i just found one pic, but i need more pics, you can help me with that?

Edit: i make a little resize of the mouth of Storm.

 

[AKI Man]

http://psd-dreams.de/categories.php?cat_id=123

Check this section here K! It has quite a few renders of storm. You may have to take parts from photos and combine them!

Keep working on this man, im looking forward to this collection.

 

[The-K]

Update in James Storm face

 

[AKI Man]

Looks much better K!! The hair is a improvement. I dont know what it is, but something is off with the face.. Maybe the nose is a tad narrow. Looking forward to release of this.

 

[Cue]

Agree with AKI there, much better than before.

 

[The-K]

Update... Robert Roode Added !

 

[AKI Man]

The face skin tone does not match the body K bro and there is too much shadow on the right side of the face. Also something is off with the eyes/nose area buddy.. Everything else is good. Glad to see all of this nearly finished! Just fix up a few things on the mods and it will be a great release. :hi

 

[The-K]

<blockquote class='quote\\_blockquote'><dl><dt>AKI Man</dt><dd>Jul 25 2011, 07:03:11 PM</dd></dl><div>The face skin tone does not match the body K bro and there is too much shadow on the right side of the face. Also something is off with the eyes/nose area buddy.. Everything else is good. Glad to see all of this nearly finished! Just fix up a few things on the mods and it will be a great release. :hi [/quote]thanks man i will fix that

 

[The-K]

Update in robert roode face

 

[Super El Guapo]

Looking good so far man keep it up.

 

[Cue]

Much better now!

Keep up the good work bro!

 

[Blue Warrior]

The whole Fortune is lookin' great, good job, and keep it up

 

[The-K]

Thanks for all the comments :toast:
Fortune is going to be release in a few days because i have a new computer so i not have anything of my work on this computer :wall: ..
so guys i hope your understand, if you have more suggestion/advice of Fortune please tell me

 

[AKI Man]

Everything is looking better K! Just work on those things suggested to you! This is a great collection and am looking forward to release.

 

[AKI Man]

Hows this coming along K?

I know you got a new comp and am looking forward to release of this.